Persuasive Speech Outline 2
Persuasive Speech Outline
The Persuasive Speech – uses Monroe’s Motivated Sequence –
Your three main points will be –
1. The Need that needs to be resolved, fixed, renewed, changed, etc.
2. The Plan to solve the problem
3. The Benefits from following the Plan
Your introduction and Conclusion remain the same.
Make sure you have your 4 sources.
PS. Your topic can’t be why we should donate blood!
Outline – Give the gift of Life – Donate Blood
Attention Getter – Did you know that about 1 in 7 hospital patients needs blood and three gallons of blood is used every minute in the United States.
Thesis Statement – With the disasters, accidents and diseases all around us the need for blood donations is skyrocketing. Today I will urge you to donate blood.
Preview of Main Points – We’ll first look at the reasons why you need to donate blood, a plan that is easy to follow and finally the benefits you and others will receive for giving the gift of life.
Transition – First, why is there a need for blood donations?
Main Point 1 – Need
The American Red Cross states on their website that every two seconds someone in the U.S Needs blood and only 5% of the eligible US population donates in a given year.
According to the Carterbloodcare.org website, in North Texas we need 1100 donors a day to donate blood.
Why is it so crucial that we donate blood?
“Blood is needed for emergencies and for people who have cancer, blood disorders, sickle cell, anemia and other illnesses. Some people need regular blood transfusions to live,” as taken from the givelife2.org website.
In a feature titled “US blood shortage puts safety measures in question” from Reuters on September 10, 2007 explains, In Washington’s Georgetown University Hospital, officials came close to canceling nonemergency operations several times this summer.
The hospital counts on having at least 130 units of this blood on hand. But “there have been times in the past few days where we’ve had only eight units,” said Dr. Gerald Sandler, the director of transfusion medicine.
“This is the worst blood shortage that I have experienced since I began directing transfusion services in 1968,” Sandler said, citing overseas travel restrictions as a major factor.
In recent years, a quarter of American hospitals have been forced to postpone or even cancel nonemergency operations — including heart bypass procedures and hip replacements — due to lack of blood, said Dr. Harvey Klein, chief of transfusion medicine at the National Institutes of Health.
Main Point 2 – PLAN –
Transition – Now that you know why you need to donate blood, let me explain to you where your blood goes and how it can help save lives.
Did you know that a full 10% of the North, Central and East Texas blood supply comes from High School students, as stated on Gr8students.org So, let me explain to you how easy it is to get started saving lives. According to the American Red Cross “Healthy adults who are at least 17 years old, and at least 110 pounds may donate about a pint of blood – the most common form of donation – every 56 days, or every two months.”
There are four steps to donating blood: medical history, quick physical, donation and snacks. The actual blood donation usually takes less than ten minutes. The entire process from the time you sign in to the time you leave takes about an hour.
Your blood can help save lives six times a year. Many of you are interested in volunteering; saving the environment and helping others here is the perfect way.
Transition – So how does it pay back –
C – Benefits
You’ve heard that only a fraction of those who can donate do – I’ve explained the need and a simple plan for your donate, now let me illustrate the benefits you will receive.
First help friends and family in surgeries and at accidents because you can store your blood for future surgeries and hospital visits. You will be helping others live.
A pint is a pound, you lose a pound every time you donate blood. So if you’re looking to lose weight here a great way. It’s about an hour of your time. It’s About Life. Think how many lives you can save.
Jeffrey Gordan, a current donor interviewed on May 26, 2012 felt a social responsibility to donate and said “you feel good you are helping someone you don’t know and you believe you would want the same thing done for you.” He also said he loves the free cookies.
Here’s a great benefit, If you began donating blood at age 17 and donated every 56 days until you reached 76, you would have donated 48 gallons of blood, potentially helping save more than 1,000 lives!
Many of you probably didn’t realize that giving blood could also save your life. From an article posted on CNN.com on April 26, 2000, Researcher’s from the University of Florida suggest new evidence that giving blood can has health benefits. He explains it is because when you give blood you remove iron and iron increases heart disease contributes to cholesterol and can damage arteries.
Review of main points – We have seen the reasons why we need to donate blood, provided a plan to donate blood and how the blood helps others and how it can help ourselves.
Call to Action – “At any given time, we only have a three-day supply of blood in this country. It’s vitally important that people give,” says Anne Eder, MD, executive medical officer of the American Red Cross.
Summary – As college students you have stated you want to help others and be socially responsible. Become a proud wearer of the I donate blood sticker. The next blood drive on campus will be next week in the main lobby area from 10 am 5 pm. Recruit your friends and classmates – only you can save a life.
Application to audience – who knows it may even be a loved ones life. Make a difference – donate blood – and give the Ultimate gift. The gift of life.
www.cnn.com – University of Florida Research Study
Interview with Jeffrey Gordon (blood donor), May 2012
“US blood shortage puts safety measures in question” Reuters, September 10, 2007
Attention Getter- How many of you are wearing converse shoes right now? Did you know that in 1917 the Converse all star shoe was originally marketed as a very popular basketball shoe. Well, the timeless shoe still has the same look and people like James Dean, Kurt Cobain, The Ramones, David Bowie and many more have worn the iconic shoe, giving it the style that is shared by people across the world.
Thesis Statement: Those of you that aren’t wearing converse right now, it’s okay because I will show you how popular, reasonably priced, and comfortable these shoes are.
Preview of main points- I will discuss why you as a consumer, need these shoes. Also, I will prove your satisfaction and benefits after wearing converse.
Transition- First, I will explain why converse has become the popular shoe that it is today.
Main point 1- Need
– There is no other shoe like it. Converse came before Nike, Adidas, and Reebok. They were founded in 1908 as a rubber shoe company and evolved from a basketball shoe into the sneakers that are worn for daily use.
-According to an article by Jarrell R. Hawkins published in February 8, 2011 called, “A History of Celebrities Wearing the Converse Chuck Taylor All-Star” said that, celebrities like LeBron James, Kristen Stewart, Daniel Radcliffe, Will Smith and many more like to wear the famous shoe.
– An another article published in April 4th, 2014 called, “How Did Converse Become Popular,” by Tyler Atwood said that, in September 2013, Bloomberg Businessweek reported that “sales of the vintage Converse brand increased 16 percent, to $494 million, in the recent quarter, while earnings before interest and taxes jumped 36 percent.”
Transition- Not only are converse popular for their celebrity endorsement, but they are also popular for their prices and availability.
Main Point 2- Satisfaction
– If you are looking to buy converse, you don’t have to look far. You can buy these shoes on the Converse website where there is a wide selection of different styles. Or, you can also buy them at any Converse retail store located in most shopping areas.
– There are many different materials that Converse comes in including canvas, leather, and suede.
– There is a wide range of Converse shoes priced between $45 to $130. However, you can buy them even cheaper if you go to the outlet malls where promotions will bring down the price to as cheap as $25.
Transition- The reason Converse has become so big is for their marketing and for recently having sold their company to Nike.
Main Point 3- Visulization
– After Nike bought Converse for $305 million, Nike has made some major improvements to the shoe and have teamed up with other companies to give limited collaborations.
– Wearing these shoes, you will feel the plush insoles giving you comfort throughout the day. You will also feel the breathability from the eyelets that will keep your feet cool.
-In many of Converse’s new shoes they use an insole called the Lunarlon that Nike uses in many of their shoes.
-Many skateboarders today have switched to converse shoes for their durability and comfort. In the skateboarding market, Converse have become one of the highest sellers.
Review the main points- As you can see through this presentation people want converse, not only for their popularity, but also for their comfort and for being able to withstand different types of activities.
Call to Action- Every type of person has worn Converse and anyone can look good in them.
Summary- If you are looking for a shoe at a reasonable price, that can last, and has the comfort to get you through the day, Converse is the shoe for you.
Application to audience- Thank you and I hope I have changed some of your minds about the shoes you wear on a daily basis.
“20 Things You Probably Didn’t Know About Converse All Stars.” Refined Guy RSS. N.p., n.d. Web. 15 Apr. 2015.
Hawkins, Jarrell. “A History of Celebrities Wearing the Converse Chuck Taylor All-Star.”Complex. N.p., n.d. Web. 15 Apr. 2015.
Atwood, Tyler. “How Did Converse Become Popular.” Bustle. N.p., Apr.-May 2014. Web. 15 Apr. 2015.
“10 Interesting Converse Facts.” My Interesting Facts RSS. N.p., 16 Dec. 2013. Web. 15 Apr. 2015.